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Canon
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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/6 second
Aperture
F/22.0
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Apr 17, 2012, 12:59:51 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
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The Rush by AndrewShoemaker The Rush by AndrewShoemaker
The Rush taken at Hideaways Beach 4-16-12

Location: Paradise (North Shore of Kauai) :)
Canon 5D Mark II
Canon 17-40L Lens
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The first view is breath-taking! You did a great job on this one... But for me it's kind of confusing. First the island is so black, dat gives you a 'dark' feeling. On the other had you have the water in front that makes you feel like it should be a picture of a magical island.

For me on the left there is some kind of tree over te coast, I should have left that one out.

I'm nog sure, but it feels like you didn't make a choice between 'fancy' and 'dark', next time, maybe that is something you could consider.

There is te option with the dark clouds, but for some reason I should expect darker water (like in the back of the picture).

If you're going for 'fancy' crap a lot from the picture, focus on the colours of the sun and the smooth water, crap out the coastline for the biggest part, and if possible also most of the clouds or make them less 'dark'...

Well, sounds like a lot of critique, but you asked for it, maybe you can take some things out of it.

Overall, it is a great picture. You can be proud of it :)
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steppeland Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Photographer
Fabulous capture!
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:iconandrewshoemaker:
AndrewShoemaker Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
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BonnieWoodson Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
The light and color are gorgeous and Bravo on a brilliant pov. Really is an impressive Image! :wow:
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AndrewShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Professional Photographer
:happybounce:
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hekla01 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
gorgious shot!
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AndrewShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Professional Photographer
:dance:
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RAIS1 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AMAZINGLY AWESOME SHOT :)
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AndrewShoemaker Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thanks so much!
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RAIS1 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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SilverVulpine Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous work! :)
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